|
Academic English Generator |
|
Unit 4.1 Essay Preview
Look at this examination question about population changes. The student has structured their answer well, but some of the words here don’t fit in with the academic style of the rest. First of all, think for yourself of a more academic way of saying it - then, you can double-click on the words to find a more academic word from the generator. ‘Population changes present
business with specific threats and opportunities’. Using the data provided,
discuss this statement in relation to the New Zealand
economy over the next 25 years. Two areas of business which are directly affected by population changes are sales and recruitment. The changes detailed below present a new context in which business must change in order to become more suitable. In
terms of sales, companies need to be aware of the important changes the In terms of size, the population is expected to get stuck at between 4 and 4 ½ million after the rapid growth of the last century. However, migration will continue to be a significant and volatile factor. More than half of the population move house every five years, and this is expected to increase, which means that companies will need to work harder to keep hold of their staff. They may need to change their employment policies to provide greater flexibility, in order to attract part-time workers. The impact of globalisation and increasing competition for skills workers worldwide means that New Zealand companies will need to keep an eye on trends overseas and change their salary structures to remain competitive. Companies which rely on a domestic market, whether for sales or recruitment, will be held back by limited growth and increasing competition. Migration from overseas is the most
difficult population change to foresee, as it goes
up and down a lot from year to year. New Zealand attempts to control external
migration by allowing the points
required for skilled migration to
be different according to the needs of its economy, but may
find it more difficult to attract the kind of employees businesses need as other
countries target the same shrinking pool of skilled workers. One opportunity
available to Ministry of
Economic Development, the Ministry of Social Development, the Department of
Labour & Statistics
New Zealand. (2003). Population and
sustainable development. Statistics
|
|
Materials by Martin McMorrow, Massey University Auckland. |