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Unit 11.1 Essay Preview
Look at this examination question about the aviation industry. The student has structured their answer well, but some of the words here don’t fit in with the academic style of the rest. First of all, think for yourself of a more academic way of saying it - then, you can double-click on the words to find a more academic word from the generator. Evaluate the contribution of ONE entrepreneur to the development of the aviation industry It could be argued that Ryanair’s success derives largely from being in the right place at the right time. The economic growth and increasing mobility of its domestic population, together with European expansion and taking away government control created ideal conditions for the growth of a budget airline. However, the fact that other budget airlines have failed shows this line of argument to be seriously wrong. It’s generally agreed that the biggest reason for Ryanair’s success has been O’Leary’s ability to focus on the essentials – driving down costs by getting rid of unnecessary services, including a business class and by using low-cost airports. O’Leary realised that as for short-haul flights, as long as comfort levels were ok, customers would easily give up 'extras' – such as food, window shades, seat-back pockets – if this meant they could reach their main goal - air travel at an affordable price. From an operational way of looking at things, this focus on the essentials led to substantial standardisation – focusing, for instance, on a single model of aircraft for the entire fleet. O’Leary has put
into practice his vision of a low-cost airline with admirable
consistency over the last 15 years. By any fair
and balanced standards, his success has been extraordinary. This is proved
by regular growth figures of 25 % in passenger numbers over the last decade. In
fact, within Generally speaking, other low-cost airlines have learnt a good deal from O’Reilly’s success in focusing on the basics. However, it’s possible to take a middle or even critical position on other aspects of Ryanair’s operations. Ryanair’s policy of keeping all its marketing activities in-house has not become a model for other airlines, for instance, who believe that advertising agencies have better expertise in this area. And another thing, Ryanair’s practice of receiving subsidies from regional airports has been ruled illegal by the European Commission and the bad publicity and heavy fines which have resulted may have cancelled out any benefits which Ryanair received from the arrangements. To sum up, O’Leary, to a large
degree, invented the modern concept of the low-cost airline in
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Materials by Martin McMorrow, Massey University Auckland. |